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GR8DAME

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Dog House
« on: October 03, 2005, 10:03:00 am »
Nick's girlfriend gave me this poem she wrote for her creative writing course, about the first time she ever came to our house. I asked if it was ok to post it here, because I wanted to share it. Kind of a different view of my big guys.
Stella




Dog House

Walking up the concrete stairs
brought me to a quant, white house.
Howls of aggression permeated the windows,
rattling the glass panes.

What lay ahead, behind that
thick wooden door had to be
the Hounds of h*ll that my sweetheart
had so affectionately been preparing me for.

The click of a turned knob
in a pin-dropping silence told me
whatever is waiting, lips curled,
will sink into my flesh before I could change my mind.

Attached to his back, my boyfriend steps in
and my feet meet the hairy carpet.
The two souless, ebony beasts
caught me off guard immediately.
Saliva was not pouring off of jaws
that showed off sparkling fangs.

Enough was all the master said
and the monsters sat down,
staring me down, looking deep within.
The words could not emit from my
paralyzed mouth.

And I burst to the hallway
prepared for the attack,
but it was not yet time.
Safely I met my sanctuary in a room
on the foot of the bed.

That's when he entered. His
masterfully defined structure
settled next to my savior, who smirked and assured that
he's alright but I wasn't going to be fooled.

Embracing the frame of the bed
I would have cried as the massive black head turned,
but I became entranced in
soft brown eyes.

He moved in on his kill.
The dog's face met mine,
and with only benign intent
he laid his soft black head
into my lap, welcoming a new friend
into the dog house.

« Last Edit: October 03, 2005, 10:14:14 am by GR8DAME »

Anakalia

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Re: Dog House
« Reply #1 on: October 03, 2005, 10:34:05 am »
OMG!!  That is an awesome poem! 

Andi

GR8DAME

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Re: Dog House
« Reply #2 on: October 03, 2005, 11:21:47 am »
The truth is, the poor kid was terrified the first time she came over. She really thought that they would eat her alive. She had never been around a dog bigger than her parents' beagle. Now she begs to stay over when Nick is on tournaments so she can sleep with Raven who was one of the Hounds from h*ll. LOL. Another convert.  ::)
Stella

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Re: Dog House
« Reply #3 on: October 03, 2005, 11:23:37 am »
Time to get her hooked on BPO!  That will seal the deal!!!

Loved the poem!

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Re: Dog House
« Reply #4 on: October 03, 2005, 11:36:01 am »
She's 17, and her Dad does not let her use the computer as an interactive medium. I catch her reading over my shoulder occaisionally though, and I had to tell her that she had to get her parent's permission to volenteer to take tonyc's St Bernard Nikki to board over Thanksgiving. Trust me, she's already hooked
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« Reply #5 on: October 03, 2005, 11:53:05 am »
There couldn't be a better and more instructive place....not just with dogs but with life!  Great role models here and incredible life experiences to learn from!  Hope she gets the okay to check in from time to time!